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Tiron7
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druggie dream

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yeah yo, just lettin u guys know i got some next level fucked up dreams. this is what drugs do to you kids, dont do drugs lmfao...


sippin on hennessy, smokin weed singin to the melody why/
cause rap is my life, wife cookein, what a nice recipe/
we on xtc, aint that some beautiful shit im not mario, im luigi/
higher than fiji/ even god couldnt see me on the tip/
fucked athena she was the one who unzipped, oh shit/
i think we're in a relationship, no no, abandon ship/
i already got beautiful kids jerkin off to comic strips/
gripped my pistol quick and killed that bitch/ fuck
i woke up crying turned on my light switch, blood everywhere/why?
my whole family was dead in electric chairs


c&c i really need some help with my writing i think. lool!
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Meika
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Re: druggie dream

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it was nice at first then later on i was like the fuck ? . but this is nice ... maybe if drugs are giving you dreams like these you needa lay low on em haha .
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Re: druggie dream

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lmfaooooo aghahahah that made me laugh so hard..........yeah taking some time
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I'm just gonna say atleast you tried maybe try to work on a few different areas and improve on flow a lil bit
I CHANNEL all my ENERGY,
while my SPIRIT is SOLEMN//
you HEAR my WORDS in the STREETS-->
because I'm SPEAKING in VOLUMES//

I'm like the MEDIA with QUESTIONS-I never stop SHOOTING
so IF you really got a PROBLEM-we can make this EXCLUSIVE...//
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COMPUTERCHIPS
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Re: druggie dream

Post by COMPUTERCHIPS »

Good run at it..think you probably could came with some more
and even stronger bars but this is what it is..short and simple.
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