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Crazy to love you

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a song i produced for my boys

my boy drive is the singer and conceptz is the rapper

only took 3 hrs total to write record and mixdown

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Nice lil track

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Dope. Real nice production. Got a nice feel to it. Drums, kicks the whole 9 sound good. I'll look for more of ya stuff.


Drive Killed it pretty much. Real nice voice and talented. Sounded like he was singing through his nose in some parts or maybe it's the mixing / effects but yeah. Conceptz was aiight. Nothing quotable but decent and flowed well

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Production is clean...I kinda dig those ol' skool video-gmae'ish soundin productions. They're good, upbeat instrumentals that make for decent club bangers.

As for dude who sings...he's comes off nasal'ish. Not really feelin him. Not sure if it's the autotune fx on his vocals that are sounding rough, or if he's singing off tune...but either way, that's gotta go.

As for Conceptz...sounds like a young guy. Decent rhyme structure and flow, could have a decent career in music if he keeps at it and polishs up around the edges of his presentation. Over all I'd give this jawn a 6/10 ...hd you guys spent more than 3 hours on this, you might've had a real banger on your hands. Which is the primary reason as to why you NEVER rush your art (or music for that matter).
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Re: Crazy to love you

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word i feel he's a little nasil as well... the suto tune was so slight that it actually fix a bit of it... he's not terrible i agree on and needs a little work and was his first time in a studio or a booth for that matter...

as for cepz he's a 19 yr old only been doin his thang for about 2 yrs now... tryin to work a little more with him to make everything clean...


thanks for the feed guys i appreciate both pos and neg. feed... makes me know what i should fix next time



and i do agree on the time frame we had... but it was the 3 hrs or nothing at all lol cuz i don't see drive often


:edit: drive has a slight lisp as well lol that could be it haha
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