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Still Sandman feat. Loszy

Post by leeroi green »

yo I cant post im outta state loon say he'll post haha yo if I suck lemme know oh yeah this track was never finished but you feel me

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well, still not my style and not sumthing i would knock but this shit was better than that other song you showed me. you actually have a good delivery man. you have some nice rhymeschemes along your verse as well. if you werent so damn big headed, ppl would probably take you a little more serious. but, going by your attitude, you could probably care less. this is good man, bullshit aside.
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Thank you I will be more chill sorry im a dick head will return feed soon

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Re: Still Sandman feat. Loszy

Post by Mic S »

delivery nd flow was cool.. lyrics were pretty nice
hook kinda was dragged out but it was ight
you did your thing.. energy was cool
i dug this track - not sure if i'd give it a load of listens but it wasn't bad
you did your thing with all 3 verses.. hook was cool needs tweaked out but nothin horrible
like loon said some of your rhyme schemes was on point
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Re: Still Sandman feat. Loszy

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good flow, good delivery.
really diggin the flow. get my head boppin.
quality aint bad either. im vibin to this, shits aint bad mang.
pretty good at rapping son, good lyrics an shit too, pretty impressed., stay at it.
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Well thank you very much

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Re: Still Sandman feat. Loszy

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first verse... it was cool... nice flow and presence... hooks kind of annoying... the delay on it was too much... lol @ the stutter... main stream... but meh its cool... person on second verse... meh not really impressed... good flow but nothing really there that made me jump up.... third verse was the same thing as the second... i'd say first verse got my attention more than anything else...

next time give a run down of who went first second n last...
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Re: Still Sandman feat. Loszy

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Leeroi green was on the 1st verse the homie loszy is on the hook and Leeroi green is on the 2nd verse daygo Mic made the beat he threw that last verse on again I guess to space out the hook I guess but basically it is all me so hope that clears it up a bit thanks for the listen I just recently gained access to a studio so I will post whatever doesn't make the album here and maybe you'll like but if you ever want some feed let me know

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