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AxelGrave
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I wrote this song for my album but never put it up cuz i didn't like the rhymes and i wrote it on the worst day of my life. The flow may seem off, but thats because i changed it up halfway through

Fuck the world i don't give a motherfuck
i'm a drink the pain away bitch get another cup
and a nigga comin up give a fuck about the consequence
i'm stayin in the game fuck sittin on the bench
i just had a shitty day so i'm a spit it how i live it
fuck advice don't give it
can't no one tell me different
me i don't stop when i'm caught speedin in the fast lane
fuck a cop don't got nothin in my gas tank
i do't run the game man i just run my campaign
and i'm in the rat race
cheatin so i never come in last place
can't say axe grave is half crazed
cuz you would't call the other half sane
back space fuck what i said i get advice
it's never write so i hope they end up dead inside
with a flow so sharp i could end your life
and i gotta vent my pain so i pick a pen and write
if you like what i'm sayin look me up online
i don't really give a fuck i don't got the time to
girl i could fly through homies reppin pyru
but fuck it though this about what i do
give a fuck why try to
ain't nobody givin me one
fuck these industry punks
tell them bitches keep up
help i've yet to see some
but then again i don't need none
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Post by Loon E Lou »

This is cool man . I like the flow on it. It flowed easily for me. The material wasmt bad either. Sometimes i write shit like this, and jus lay it down to see how it sounds. most of the time ill end up keepin it. I dont kno i thats the case here but, i definately wouldnt mind hearin this on record man.

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yeah man, pretty cool. Nice read mah dude
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good for a future audio... simple as a text piece but... im sure this is for an audio... the flow was great...
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