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Insane Verse

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This is just some shit I sat down and wrote. I wrote it quickly, with no purpose, meaning, or direction. Cypher material. With that being said, enjoy.
Is my dichotomous exhibition just an impractical schism,
Ripping in two different pieces, displaying my division,
Paved paths to graves by ways of wrath I won't belay,
Bathed in blackened bays, craving blood in massive ways,
Tactile waves of feeling meaning that tactical relays,
Replay impulses drafting days psychopaths call the plays,
My mass is weighed by the flaws I call my consciousness,
The pompousness my ego repos to stroke my confidence,
Boast that most folks I bust open never met the quota,
Changing iotas with my presence, taking precedence over,
The smallest of matters which gather, deciding factors,
In all of the shattered theorems humanity's mastered,
That lead back to the cracking of our fanatical habits,
Smashing lacks of mercy, manifest grammatical tactics,
Panzershrecks rehearsing how to get radicals mashed in,
Trenches by the hundreds when a sabbatical's practiced,
Now indeed, some of that is testament to the blackness,
Of the hearts of men ravaged by the devil's attraction,
The smell of a battle is primal, the necessity travel,
The endeavor to rattle spinal architecture and babble,
About the rabble you conquered to whore out or enslave,
Reroute the boundaries around em to form their enclave,
Open the bomb bay doors and pour upon them atrocities,
Cauterize their wounds before they even start to bleed,
Mark the beasts with marks that mark your properties,
Real estate the real and fake focus of your conquering,
Hurtful barter earth and water an opening for slaughter,
Low ravines, carry martyrs to eternal torture lockers,
Self esteem meets hell regimes intent to decapitate,
Exacerbate inherent hate in between each different race,
Coherent states of unity dissolving as they fall in,
Call in the hell hounds to market these heavy coffins.
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[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Re: Insane Verse

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Jesus man, your flow is epic.

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Lol, thanks, Borat.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Post by Defiance »

Dude.......................................

WOW

this shit was awesome man.. great vocal.. great schemes.. very fucking impressed my dude.. always love to read great pieces like this..

that whole pompousness line got me riddled man.. like how the fuck!!!


but that i was like oh its A monumental piece (pun intended)

dude you need to start doing audio or something man love to hear this on a track


keep dropping man
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defi said it right... real sick drop... each bar had its own thought and they all flowed together perfectly... very impressive my dude... keep um droppin
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Epic flow buddy. You must have some really intelligent fans with your level of vocabulary, otherwise most of this will fly over their heads. (me included)<lies. What impressed me most as that it got deeper and stronger as it went on. My favorite bars: "Mark the beasts with marks that mark your properties,
Real estate the real and fake focus of your conquering," <<Fire. Nice work, best i've read yet.
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The multi's and shit were fucking crazy, giving the flow a very very nice feel to it... I can see how this was definitely all over the place though, but sometimes it helps to just write anything and everything, as a brain exercise if you will, and for this to be just that, means alot for how this all came together. I liked how there was a very wide range with the vocab, that helped keep it fresh as well. Nice drop bro.
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Even though this is not directed very well... THE MULTIES< SCHEME< FLOW< are all reasons to record this shit straight through like you were thinking! Just do it up already.
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Post by CBK »

sick flow, sick vocab, an absolute epic masterpiece, however, there is one downside to it, not every person has the intelligency to understand such a complex script therefore your bound to get haters. its not always the most lyrical scripts that capture the attention.
exquisite post tho!!! respect
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I wanna be your apprentice, lol! The drop was crazy dude, I truly am a fan of your work. Keep it up man, I need some inspiration.
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doooppee im a monumental fan now
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