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Slicka
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ALright think im gettin the hang of the pro tools now. This song is alright been workin more on the quality though. So lemme know if you think it sounds better!
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on da mixx...

not bad as far as volumes go..tbh to me the only thing wrong is you got ya dubs(backuptrax)a lil too loud...it wouldnt be as bad if they were on time...you might wanna step up ya delivery it kinda sounds like ya reading...but other than that lyrically its proper.beat is pretty nice too
just tryin 2 help homey...pz
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appreciate the feed fam an yeah im jus workin on quality right now tryna find what works best for me den the other stuff im workin on later
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Post by Alvin »

Nah, this sounds better than a while ago, but id do what tre recommended, the effect is a bit weird, i would have went for something maybe a little fuller. Not bad man, keep clicking buttons till you find what your after.
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