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Sentus- The Funeral

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-AruAo8AH4E[/video]

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the beat is PERFECT for what you trying to give here... I liked the way you wrote this.. the vibe is nice.. hook was ok, i think you could have put a little bit more into the hook... but this is def a good over all track man.. i enjoyed it
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Re: Sentus- The Funeral

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That beat is nice man, real smooth and creates the vibe well...I like the chorus didn't think it was bad at all...Your delivery is wat sets this apart because the somber feel and the concept of the story meshes together well, good work man
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Re: Sentus- The Funeral

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Beat is mos def chill.
Concept is pretty awesome.
Lyrics are above average.
Flow is on point.
Delivery is good.

7.5/10
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Re: Sentus- The Funeral

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i think u didn't know the tempo of the beat.... cuz the delay was off.... but still the beats nice... the way you wrote it fits... good shit bro.... reminds me of some old school Eminem or some spoken word... keep droppin bro
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