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So-Call Rap Toonz_((pt. one))

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this writings is not aimed at anyone, it basically explaining wannabe's who talk down on others because
of the way they write their raps instead of giving them somthing positive to work on..K Panda is cool..i wrote this after we had our lil'spat.



corruptionz explodes valcanic eruptionz
slaying every mcee in pathz

when i confront'cha
its like doin basic math

magic spellz and mythz seemz eazy
Cata' tha fortunate cool breezy

rap veteran phenomenon
Cata' tha extraordinary one


hot wax bio-chronicles

battles is like a test run to me
sneak attack is a blair
Cata's last name going all warfare

Rap Toonz be like check that noobie
my rhymez is a proven detector

radioactive mic-skillz generator
slashin rap toonz

Cata' go home and fuck
and promised to be king by noon.

Troubled toonz, getz doomed
Clean Slapped acrossed tha globe
While warz unfoldz

Homicidal actionz taken
Rap toonz runnin neva wanted action

Cata’ tha beast ,Quickly defeatz
Cata’ tha un-tainable war veteran
Bring nuthin but that heat


Most be talking wanna be tha best
Dunk fast, STRAPPED YA’VEST!
Im that rush in ya’ chest
That silver bullet penetrating ya’ vest.

Im that cold that’s runs ya’ nose
That yelk in ya’ throat

Im that thought, when ya’ humming
That soreness on ya tonguesals

Imagine me in a thousand ways
Grasping ya’ soul
Huh’ damn im deadlier than aides

soul snatching is in-capable
these rap toonz endz up as dead nieghborz

you see my flowz
even ya' eyez is beggin for more

Cata' jotz down more venom
but his pen explodez on content

causing catastrophic eventz
around the continents

ahhh fuck!
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Re: So-Call Rap Toonz_((pt. one))

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Im not sure who this is aimed at, but its getting moved. Stop posting in random places, please make an effort to follow common sense.

You might also want to try leaving feedback for others, something a little more than "good" "nice" etc.
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its not aimed at anyone dude..it seem you're the only one that have a problem with it..and beside ..this is where all rap artist show skillz...and i see nowhere how im breakin the rules,
ratha im here or somewhere else im still goin to kick my sht tha way i kick it

but if you feel like its aimed at you than step up hater.
other than that i have nuthin to lose.
survive or die tryin


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Know your place. I told you already fool, grab a mic and destroy me, till then stop acting like you're worth more than anyone on here.
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