*uc* You

[Meika]

[fuck you and the lie you told me, 5 months down the drain fuck everything i said it don't mean a damn thing]
you brought me tears and pain as i look back and remince,
about how this whole love thing of our doesn't make sence
i moved on but it's hard to walk away
you're on my mind every second of the day
i keep on tellin my self i aynt trippen
but the pictures i keept flippen(of us)
then i quit all this crazy ass crap
but you came runnin right back
draggin me right back in
to this stupid shit again
i guess i was blinded by this thing called "love"
[fuck you and the lie you told me, 5 months down the drain fuck everything i said it don't mean a damn thing]
i do miss you holding me, our sweet talks and you holding my hand
days and weeks went by then the lies started and thats what i didn"t understand
so i kept tellin my self it's not true but then i saw you with her
so i left with out sayen a word
walken away with tears runnin down my cheeks
fellin sorry for the next bitch he meets.

[Catastropic]

WOW, THAT NGGA IS A GONER...LOL

NICE!

[Alvin]

Meika, not a bad piece. Nice emotion. I would focus some on structure though.

Another thing, Never, please, NEVER, title anything a cuss word. Thanks.

[Meika]

awh my bad thanks though.

[Deception]

Not bad, raw emotion was there try to increase line length with more content, try using basic imagery to pull the reader in, also spell check drops I'm not a good with grammar infact I'm dyslexic but spelling mistakes fuck up the flow and throw readers off, just a heads up

Peace

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[QwarterZ]

This was coooool....a well used topic but you handled your own on this...the hook was cool...u kept a cool little flow going which made it seem interesting..overall a cool little piece

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[MonuMental]

This was pretty good, Big Meik. I'm glad you're starting to be more open with your outlet for expression. Keep doing you.

[vanity]

very nice i liked it, i agree about more focus on structure but it was real good i write alot about love so i can relate to what ur saying