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Babysittin Kids

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grab the mic and jus flipped, lost all damn control of this shit,
baby's been cryin all night, can't get control of this shit//
I'm startin a movement of movement, ta ban all wack emcees in this unit,
cmon lets get together and wack all these crazy ass lunics//
chain em up to the walls, whiplash on their backs,
no bitches allowed, no matter if they "Splish" or they "Splash"//
don't need a backstory or cover, fuck it let's go after the mothers,
the whores and their stories, bout how they "needed one anothers"//
Ya I been through a lot, seen a few sights,
ya I seen a few shots, been a few fights//
and "they" come along, "splish splash'n" along, no rights cuz they wrong,
with some sights of bein "it" but boy they've been conned//
Pre-writers and biters, ridin coat tails and cocks,
spot these bitches from a distance, cuz they get lost on the block//
"splish splash'n" their fashion, which is suckin dick til its dry,
always pick em out of a line, cuz they got jizz in they eye//
I don't mean to point fingers, jus can't stand babysitting these clingers,
the bees with no stingers, no one wants ta associate with these lingers//
garbage it is, it needs to go out to the trash,
and then they come and pick it up in about "45 minutes" to make "Splish" and it "Splash"//

Babysittin aint easy
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wonders who this was aimed at.....
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Nice drop bro the flow was alright but the disses were dope. 7/10

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This Was Aiight

Tha Flow Was Ehh' I Think Some Bars Are Stretch'd
You Could Add some Multies And Mix Some Metas Wit Your Personals To make It Nore Effective.. Instead Of Jus Sayin His Name You Dig..



Overall Good Diss.. I Would Like To Read More Like It .. More Elevated Tho ..



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yup
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this was cute...I like to splish splash once in a great while...I hate it when the magikarp does that...I'm like just evolve mu'fucker...you know your gonna be rah rah'n like a dungeon dragon..but he dont listen...anyway..keep writing sssssssson....

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ha
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this shit was whacker than a mothafucka

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this shit was whacker than a mothafucka
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LOL might aswell call the post splashking diss. But hey its not a bad writtin. Like toyh said clean it up a little.
Anybody else feeling a battle here ?

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is like your cockin splash LOL...
Dis was aight, work on flow...
nice drop man.

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