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Magnificent (Strings)

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My cool guy flow, CHECK ME OUT!!! Feed is returned, unless you suck...


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Re: Magnificent (Strings)

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MOTHAFUCKA you are flowin your ass off. I had no fuckin idea. Good shit, dude. Good shit. I listened twice. Awesome presence and vocal control. Scheme is cool, as well. Fits the beat nicely. Keep this shit up. LOL's at the outro. Now, feed this shit, foo!!

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Re: Magnificent (Strings)

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Production could use work. Flow is on point, but its not easy to make out every word. I'm actually listening to this for the second time and I like the majority of the lines, just needs more of a stand out delivery with the flow, in my opinion... Its seems alot more like you are just talking fast paced. Just some thoughts man. I like where you are going though, and I really think, lyrically, you have developed alot. Now its time to find your place in the beat, you know?
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Re: Magnificent (Strings)

Post by Mic S »

dope flow, lyrics cool - mix could use a little polishing other than you was snapping -- haha when we gonna ever hop on a collab.. we talked about it for a while now.. b4 i started site if im not mistaken :P
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Post by pest »

This shit crakks.. its kinda funky man.. i like the vibe man... Only thing is turn the vocals up a tab...
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Re: Magnificent (Strings)

Post by Defiance »

wow shit was tight.. a lil to loud on the vocals which fucks with quality.. but i thought it was dope.. reminded me of some del the funky homo shit

like it man.. keep it up.
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Re: Magnificent (Strings)

Post by Alvin »

Smooth start in the beat...


Wow you are loud. Your vocab on the flow is awesome man, silver tipped tongue huh. The la la da da shit fit pretty nicely. Funny that you went multiple personalities on the hook name drop. Man, you'll be a beast if you can lock down your quality, nice original flow. Hope we chock on a big dick? your preferably? Psh... funky ass maybe. The talking reminded me of some old school 70s shit, where they'd talk half the track, lol. The only thing i can point out other than quality, is the style of delivery in each of your songs has remained the same, push yourself out of the box some man. Nice drop though
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Re: Magnificent (Strings)

Post by HKX »

M33kish... ur goin' loco on ur music homie dis beat is 1 of da dopest beats I've heard u rap on. Dis is my type of beat & I liked ur stilo on dis. U had me laughin' when u was talkin' good stuff bro. Flow keeps gettin' more on point da more I'm hearin' it & ur uppin' ur presence a lil more. Work on ur presence dis was very laid back 2 me sounded koo 2 me. Quality wise dis was aight vocals r loud next time u mix it up make sure u match up ur vocals practice on dat. When u get da chance invest in new equipment if u need help wit dat holla @ me I'll tell u wat 2 get. Ur def passionate bout ur music & I think ur music deserves more quality.

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Re: Magnificent (Strings)

Post by TreTru »

hmm beat sounds crazy..

wtf?...haha wait ... sounds like sum diggable planets shit..haha..

haha he said detatch my dingaling?..your crazy dawg..

you know what this beat is soundin like some kinda television drama score..

wow..u know what its different ..i wont hate ..maybe werk on ya quality a lil bit..ya vocz make you sound like your in a small room or bathroom ..not sure if thats an effect or the mic....

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Re: Magnificent (Strings)

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

this was pretty nice, quality could be better but that could always be fixed with a little money lol, beat was dope, i've found from personal experience that elevator music is one of the nicest shits to spit to


good drop
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