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Dynamiq
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Gnali Means Warrior

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I wan't ya'll to let me know what you think about this new song from my up and coming mixtape "Berry Blue Koolaid" dropping late 2011.



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Dope track all in all, sick production too. I was diggin the flow nd the vocab, this shit is "Barely Legal" tight.

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Damn this one is one of my fav's by you. Definately brought your A game don't know what to say but keep doing what you do.
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Listenin...
OK... classick fuckin beat...
OK... multis killen 'em... ok... we got a spitter...
Light skin aint in nigga...
"Go to town on occasion to stay a city slicker"
nice...
CHORUS is real... feelin it...

Stand up guy..thoughts tell me to sit down...
love it....

All around nice... I dont judge production... fuck it... I spit...lol... But you killed this shit... you spit that real...seems to be the way hip hop is goin nowadays and I love it... Your flow is solid... I can tell it could be better... your lyrics are sharp, laid back, not over saturated with similes but sprinkled with some clever word play... I felt it homie... 8.8/10
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thanks for the feed everyone i definitely appreciate it! look out for my upcoming mixtape dropping this year "Berryu Blue Koolaid"
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i've got nothing bad to say about the verses

i wasn't feeling the hook though
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i appreciate the honesty man.
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thats radio shit right there
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thanks for the feed!
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