Murder on a hit list (feed)

[Defiance]

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lyrics:
Verse1:
Couldnít ghost me if a ghost wrote your verse
Yeah you loon E but I was loccing first
You so absurd thinking youíll better ME
Iíll Tear his mind from flesh like the letter E
With No longevity loonís a flash in the pan
You losing this bet so put the cash in my hand
This half of a man couldnít stand to my stature
Not the real deal this man is an actor
Not a factor so Iíll blow his scheme
heíd have to overdose to be as dope as me
this man is a miget heís only 5 foot 3
ill put him in his place like A fuckin rookie
you mistook me for someone to be fucked wit
this aint a battle this is loon E destruction
in conjunction with lou on his stomach
not a REAL G you hands in a puppet
so you subject to death like American me
quit the bullshit your embarrassing me
you a terror to see and its not cuz you sick
its cuz your ugly as shit with 3 inch dick
lil bitch HKX murked you on your own shit
I bet in a squeeze this loon would snitch
This mans not fire but hes bout to get lit
Get hit cuz heíd need a book to fuckin flip script
Dip shit this aint personal its just business
Youíll slip and illest will be the witness

Cuz its murder on a hit list

:chorus:

on a hit list
on a hit list
its just, murder on a hit list
on a hit list. On a hit list
its just murder on a hit list
from start to finish
loon be diminished
in front of the illest
and youíll call it
just murder on a hit list
on a hit list. On a hit list

Verse2:
On stop for hip hop to find what lou is not
Bet you scared to walk on your own block
You just talk aint nothing for me to wet your back
Not talking race but I will send you back
Your horrendous act is nothing but fiction
Dog you last week and im the new edition
Youíll blow a piston trying to race wit me
Lou has a foot fetish cause he face defeat
So patiently I waited to end your run
And fuck a battle rap Iíll end you son
Itís a 10 to 1 that youíll live through this
Yeah you skilled But do you know real music
This hoes useless he aint worthy of me
This man aint real heís justa version of me
Its urgent I speak to break his mystique
And teach this youngin about real technique
And bruise his cheeks with these hooks and jabs
Your broken bones will keep you lookin back
I shook this fag like 9.0 earthquake
Your fake and youíll never take first place
Iíll serve you gourmet than snatch your plate
Than Leave ya filleted in shallow dirt grave
You cant hurt may wit your fragile gimmicks
words a prison Iíll have assholes finished
you hit you peak when you had no limits
this is the murder of loon and yall are the witness

cuz its murder from a hit list

:chorus:

on a hit list
on a hit list
its just, murder on a hit list
on a hit list. On a hit list
its just murder on a hit list
from start to finish
loon be diminished
in front of the illest
and youíll call it
just murder on a hit list
on a hit list. On a hit list


just looking for feed and pointers on whats the deal

[Typhris]

One thing worth while.. If you were to adjust your tone to be more dominant at times with delivery that plus better wording can do you a fair amount of justice (wonders even)

Apart from that.. I noticed this is a diss track to one of the members- and yea the content is weak, flow just at par if that for most/half of it..

keep etchin

[Young Trell]

Flow is iffy homey... Lyrics aint bad but they aint great either... I'd give it a 6/10... And thats just cuz i've heard worse...

Keep spittin though... Chorus unique... Flowed...