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WHO THE FUCK AM I? (NEW AUDIO)

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WHO THE FUCK AM I? (NEW AUDIO)

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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Beat's too loud for the vocals. Your flow is on fucking point though. I like the content. This beat goes pretty hard too, which is cool. I like the wordplay you have tied in the verse. Im a huge fan of wordplay, as Im sure you know. The chorus is tight too bro. I wouldnt mind bumping this in the ride at all, if your vocals were up higher so you could be better heard. Nice drop though duke. Keep bringing this to the table. Ups on this one.

The third verse, it seemed you crammed alot of words in one section by the way... Kinda takes away from that verse. Maybe its the second one. Im not sure, but I think you know what Im referring to.
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Thanks pimpin...
my boi didnt fukk with the levels too much....
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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