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MonuMental
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MonuMental - Ride With It

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Writ and spit by yours truly. The beat production was a collaborative effort between myself and my business partner, Mr Mindz. Check out his soundclick page here:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... ID=1031128
6. Ride With It.mp3


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[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Re: MonuMental - Ride With It

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First off, the bass line cracks man. The layering on the chorus could prolly be better, the Beginning "ride with it" is a little to dominant to completely understand what your saying. The flow pace is good, a little dumbed down from what im used to reading from you. Its got a nice laid back feel to it. Id prolly bump something like this. I'm just not a fan of topics like this. The ending sounds good, although i didn't like how the beat got interrupted for the stop. Sounds good man, only complaint is the bass line cracked in my shure headphones and it being a ride with the bass track id expect something harder.
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Re: MonuMental - Ride With It

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I share a few of those opinios, my friend, and I shall make the necessary changes. The bass drum cracks cause the actual instrument sound was meant to so that, sort of a distorted bass drum. To give it a more unique feel. Hoever, I have wanted to fatten up that bass, and I think that's what i'm gonna do.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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