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Flowetry
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v7ouWEwd2cI

This is a track off my mixtape "Poets Paradise"..15 yr. old on the mic, let me know what you think.
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Wadup flowetry good to see u joined illest u will learn alot here. One thing i can suggest u work on is the quality of ur mic. Its not TOO expensive if you look in the right places. Kill those effects too man i dono if they were intentional? Anyways i like sum of ur lines dude keep it comin

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Post by The Hand of God »

your lyrics aren't bad, but like dude said, your mic is pretty bad

you're also off beat for most of the time

definitely not the worst i've heard though
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