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Sentus
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This was sick man, I can tell we deffinitely got a similar style. Your flow was dope and your lyrics were great. Quality was a little ehhh but tha was the only downfall. Keep it up man
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i would say work on quality and you would be their. flow was different. i dont really have a style would like to hear more from you! bt this was an alright joint
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I like the drop, very chill, and the adlibs were on point to me didnt overcrowd too much, real clean...the chorus was ok but couldve been better maybe a lil more energy...the second verse was real steady fit the beat and rode well...Like this track man def. repeat worthy...
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Re: ShysT - Elevate

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yeah feeling this right here, agree that the chorus was off.. flow was tight tho..
keep um comming man, i be enjoying your drops
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Dope track man, feelin your relaxed flow. Your delivery also reminds me of Asher Roth which in my opinion is a huge compliment!
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i think the only thing that needs to be changed is the quality of the track,the flow was decent as well as the lyrics. your style reminds me of asher but hey it's not because you sound white lol. keep it up
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Re: ShysT - Elevate

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this was dope bro...smooth delivery...nice rhyme scheme
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