I'm an Estonian rapper. English is my second language. I'm gonan give out a few songs here. If you like, like the video. .Subscribe too. Also, C&C is always appreciated.
Seriously, i signed here in hope to get C&C, something not often offered. So, yeah.. Hope you like it.
Disain - "Classic"
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O5Q8nWxQ_xQ&hd=1[/video]
Jyrbä ft. Disain - Tühjad Pilgud
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xJTeP_tq ... er&list=UL[/video]
Disain - High Life
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UFWT2aN9 ... er&list=UL[/video]
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Disain - "Classic" (included a few other songs)
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Re: Disain - "Classic" (included a few other songs)
How do you define a lazy word? Like lazily added to make a rhyme or lazily pronounced, making the word kind of die before the end?
Yeah, i couldn't connect to the beat through melody. I think i tried writing too much in, making it harder to keep track on the melody.
Thanks for the comment though. Really appreciate it
Yeah, i couldn't connect to the beat through melody. I think i tried writing too much in, making it harder to keep track on the melody.
Thanks for the comment though. Really appreciate it
Re: Disain - "Classic" (included a few other songs)
Track "Classic" I like the accent also.. it was hard to enjoy it fully cuz you were off beat all over the place.. 2nd verse was a little bit better but still all over the place.. if you could ride the beat this would be golden.. i like the hook, it was tight, your presence was there and energy was nice also... it seemed like you wrote the lyrics before you had the beat, speaking for myself, it really is better if you wrap the lyrics around the beat.. makes it flow nicer... makes the bars sound fuller and complete... but keep it up man...
Track "High life" you rode that beat alot better, the beat is laid back and all, you put alot of energy in it.. but (if this makes since) you need more emotion and a little less energy, the 2nd verse was better cuz of the vibe you were giving, your vocals were a little more laid back... more relaxed.. the hooks are sick also.. you got good taste in beats... out of the 2 that i could understood this is the better one
Track "High life" you rode that beat alot better, the beat is laid back and all, you put alot of energy in it.. but (if this makes since) you need more emotion and a little less energy, the 2nd verse was better cuz of the vibe you were giving, your vocals were a little more laid back... more relaxed.. the hooks are sick also.. you got good taste in beats... out of the 2 that i could understood this is the better one
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I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
Re: Disain - "Classic" (included a few other songs)
Aye, thanks. Getting the emotion and energy balanced without making the lyrics go off in the wrong direciton is hard for me. I'm a well-credited writer, but not a very great rhymer( IMO).. I may get them bars done, but the flow.. It's hard.
The positive comments are giving me a lot of food for thought though. Thanks for being different than them other forums(estonian hip hop forums only have trolls trollin, y'know?). Respect.
BTW, if anybody feels like responding.. From the two you can understand(aka the 2 songs in english), which one did you like more?
The positive comments are giving me a lot of food for thought though. Thanks for being different than them other forums(estonian hip hop forums only have trolls trollin, y'know?). Respect.
BTW, if anybody feels like responding.. From the two you can understand(aka the 2 songs in english), which one did you like more?
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