eLmo - Karate

[eLmo]

Here is my latest freestyle I put up. let me know what you think

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-karate-freestyle

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[Kause mc]

Hey bro it aint too bad just a bit monotone maybe mix it up a bit n bring more energy to it. Not bad keep posting

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[eLmo]

Hey bro it aint too bad just a bit monotone maybe mix it up a bit n bring more energy to it. Not bad keep posting

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Does this other freestyle I did have the same monotone as this one? I tried to switch it up a bit.

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-g ... -freestyle

[TreTru]

well yeah the flow sounds pretty on....
it's aight for a freestyle .. lotsa rhymin goin on...
keep doin ya thing...

[Darth Vader]

Yea yeaaa you got that Paul Wall style but more urban and new age at the same time. Try to work on expressions and more feeling cuz it sounds a little robotic, just feel your shit a bit more homie. When you spit, you should be convincing the listener. Not saying you don't sound confident, just feel your shit when you spit it!! Good look tho keep rippin blood.

[Slicka]

id work more on trying to deliver it harder...you don't want to be compared or sound like someone you want to sound like yaself....maybe try to put some more energy in it use a flanger or pan could fix a lot of the mono tone....maybe use a slight reverb ?? bt overall an alright drop

[eLmo]

Alright guys, big shout out to Slicka for the help.

I played around with panning and some delay, tell me what you think. Original post link updated automatically via soundcloud.

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-karate-freestyle