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Alirght lemme know whassup
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You know, at fist when the beat jumped off, i thought to my self, oh no, not again. But... it turned out to be a decent listen man. I really did enjoy it, i noticed you flipped the flow a couple minor times which was nice. Your boi ain't to shabby either. Quality is getting finer, and so is the flow, so keep it up my brother from another mother lol.
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wow slick ..... your so much better than when i started listening to you. you ride the beat now son!!!! lol. jk... but fo real. that hook is sick pimp. who did it. and keep up the good work bro, your elevating son!
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lol, Just like P.D. said, when it started i was like.. Crap another main stream gay track.. but the flow really changed the angle and direction i thought it was gonna go.. i liked it... and you def have came up since when i first heard your 1st drop.. Illest does help.. your boy was nice, you and him work well together... keep dropping man..
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Damn Appreciate it. LOL and you said mainstream lol i do do a lot of that garbage lol but thanx and yeah illest has helped a lot... im in the process of tryna write this new song lol so far the beat whoopin my ass tho
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uhhmm this is kinda groovy..i hear what ya tryin to do here.

intro not bad..pretty clear soundin decent deliv too..

the deliv on the hook is pretty good..i like the timin and melody too..

verse first guy.. pretty good quality...might wanna work on the timin a lil.not as clear as the intro part.lyrics aight for this type of song..

2nd verse 2nd guy?..coo i agree with the others ya'll got a good vibe 2 gether..i like this guys timin and lyrics..

im not sure who is who ..overall this actually was a pretty coo joint here .. keep doin ya thing...
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thanx fam appreciate it and i do verse 1
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