ShysT - Toture Rap

[ShysT]

ShysT - Torture Rap

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7415376


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[Deciple]

the flow on this was real clean and i liked it.. hook was on point and all but i just didnt kill for it at all.. vocals could go up a tade... end of the 2nd verse kinda sounded like you were losing your breath here and there.. but still nice.. over all its nice.. good stuff bro

[Alvin]

Sounds like a mouth full, and as stated above, you can afford to increase the vocal volume. Especially on the parts where the beat picks up. Again though, as I pointed out in a previous song, your flow is rather played after a while, i rather zone you out, because it sounds repetitive. Scream, laugh, breathe, do something lol. That's me being an ass though, you have a nice vocab, and a nice style, nut again, don't play yourself out. I'd hate to listen to an album, where every song has the same flow. Keep posting, fuck the lack of activity, don't stop your bus homie.

[TreTru]

haha like the intro...

hmmm ..ayy i like ya flo from the get..quality sounds pretty good..

hooks pretty cool..like how the beat breaks down coming back into the 2nd verse..

well your multis seem all in the right spot..aight..

3rd verse..i get what someone said about it soundin a lil monotonous with the flow scheme..its a great flow scheme but changeups help bring more swag to a track..

all in all though this was good imo..that flo thing is a matter of opinion so .. if you got a fan base theres no reason they shouldn't be bumpin this track....1