leeroi green and friends

[leeroi green]

this is a curt p production i recorded in Fayetteville NC pre mix its the only copy i got curt on the hook and beat the homie B.Billions sorry but the verse before mine which is last was this guys 1st time recording and didnt have a rap name and i wont give his government so lets just call him the white boy shout outs to them

oh yeah i forgot an alias last time its ya boy the Kakorot or rap Leeroi Green

[2xS]

Ite, So The Beat Is Catchy Right Off The Bat. . .Quality Is Much Clearer Than Last Song! I Like The Hook So Far. . .First Verse. . .I Like The Slow, Fast Approach That's Taken. I Kinda Feel You Were Holding Back Tho. You Shoulda Came With More Energy. 2nd Verse Came In Slightly Louder Than The First. "Knock A Nigga On His Black Ass" LMFAO. . .3rd Verse, Cash And That Blowjob?? Umm. . .I Think He Coulda Ended His Verse Better, It Didn't Have Any Rhyme To Me. . .4th Guy Was Probably The Best As Far AS Delivery/Presence. He Just Had A Grimey Feel To His Vocals. Nothin Stood Out As Far As Lyricism IMO, It Just Seemed Like Your Basic "I'ma Kill A Nigga And Get Money" Song. . But, Ya'll Did Do It Good. Props.

[leeroi green]

sorry not to elaborate
Curt P 1st verse
B.Billions 2nd
the white boy 3rd verse
Leerooi Green final verse

thanks for the feed tho appreciate the listen

oh and i will say that i record so infrequently that in most cases i throw together a verse in minutes its heavy when everyone you know tells you that you're the best period and i'm broke as fuck and i dont have the luxury to stop hustling so a ride with the homie ends up at a garage studio and i got thirty minutes to drop or i miss my chance so i drop and i was signed to an indie and burned on that so i'm not trying to get signed again i just love this shit and thats why i am the undeniable last dragon of hip hop and i really hate seeming cocky but i have to be the best regardless of a deal or no deal i believe i am hip hop's champion and i will continue to search for someone better so i can surpass them i still got a lot of work to do on my studio presence voice overs adlibs and such thats why i sincerely thank you for the feed

_KINGPEN__

[Alvin]

Ok, sounds like it wasn't planned very well, maybe some more of friends mixing in together would have pulled this together nicer instead of the u go, now my tun approach. Ur verse was clear, well delivered, but again, self boasting... unattractive lol. Dogs that fight have no need to bark, so id like to see somin different come from ur skill level. Maybe a written? Again, not my style, but for what it was, u did a fairly well job. Rather short, but 4 fools and two hooks can call for that.

Pay it forward: too lazy to link someones shit lol

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-- Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:04 pm --

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[MesaR]

I thought this was pretty sick ayy, vocals sound abit to low, or that might just of been me, beat is catchy as fuck i like it.

[Slicka]

really nice beat..............this was way better then the last one i heard n terms of quality..........feel you can bring more pressence to it tho but overall good drop

[JDR]

No offense but I hate this beat. Really thot it sounded like shit. But to the actual song. 1st verse - decent. I liked the slow approach. 2nd dude killed it IMO. Sounded like a nigga from 36 Mafia ha. White dude was aiight but he coulda came at this beat wit a faster delivery. Your verse prolly outshined the rest IMO. Liked ya lyrics, thot you stayed on point and killed it.

[Kau the Lion]

Delivery and flow were on point. Fourth verse was def the best of the bunch but none were really bad. Lyrics were meh. Kind of the same ol' same ol'. Beat was cool. Had the vibe of an NES soundtrack, so I was digging that. Overall, not bad but I'd like to see something more thoughtful from you.

[leeroi green]

i got you kau some emotional sum coming soon thanks for honest feed