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Neva let go_slicka_ ft. anonimus

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Neva let go_slicka_ ft. anonimus

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jus fuckin wit the pro tools a lil more
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this beat is way sick.. hook is pretty cool... topic again aint really my type of joint.. but still good track...
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thanx for the feed
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Re: Neva let go_slicka_ ft. anonimus

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Agreed. Beat Is Nice. Quality Is Still Overpowering. Your Flow/Delivery Got A Bit Smoother On This One. You Are Really Improving In That Category. Still Got Sum Rough Edges. You Hear How The hook Blends With The Beat? Try To Get Your Vocals To Do That, Instead Of Overpowering. 2nd Dude Started Off Nice, His Quality Fits Good. Has Good Flow, And Rhythm. Overall Decent Track, It Ends Abruptly. VERY Abruptly, Don't Like That. Lol. Good Shit Tho Man, You're Getting There, That's Fa Sho
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Your def. cleaning up ur delivery on this one, like 2xs said its a lil choppy but ur gettn better, it does kinda end abruptly but just keep practicing and putting out tracks and ull get it
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Re: Neva let go_slicka_ ft. anonimus

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Yeah it's cool, bootleg beat? :L

i dont mind the hook it's pretty sweet, i like your style and approach it's just your typical swag as the next guy though, keep it up man..
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ay dude, not a bad hook catchy beat, i think ur flow could hav been a tad more on point but it still flowed with the beat quite well. i really enjoyed the 2nd verse expecially towards the end of it.

dope keep it up
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