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what have i done

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tryna do into some more depth
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This is my favorite track that you have introduced... Im way feeling this..
Good lyrics, great emotion and presences.. delivery is nice.. over all way good man.. only think i could say i want alot fond of is the hook.. imma give this a 8/10 track.. keep it up man
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thanx fam appreciate it
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Lol "slicka man". . .Sounds Like A Super Hero. YAAAAAA Quality Is Crisp, Best You've Done So Far. Delivery Is Good Until The Part After "I'm Only Human" After That I Feel You Fell Off Bad. Chorus Seems Really Forced, Except The "Love kinds Sucks" Part. That Shit Was Nice, But The Rest Sounded Ehhh. You Should Count Syllables And Try To Rehearse Riding The Beat Before You Record, That'll Help You Out Alot. "Get Tha Fuck Out My Crib" LMAO! Funny. AGAIN WITH THE ABRUPT ENDINGS MAN!!! Dude. . .Let The Beat Ride For Like 10 Seconds, And Gradually Fade It Out!!! That'll Make You Tracks End So Much Better!!! Decent Listen Tho
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