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Audible Thought
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Untitled lyrical heat

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watch me as i make spittin seem so fuckin effortless
y'all can't rock the mic no balls and full of estrogen
im the definition of alternative medicine
bring life to the essence, hope to the brethren
no body is better man im up late like letterman
clash swords with foes, hell is where im sendin em
get it together man im only half way thru the verse
is this ur first time, hearin how much words are worth
i can turn dirt to diamonds with magical rhyming
defy, modern science like egyptians and mayans
different, as i am is hard to find nowadays
everybody wanna be drake or lil wayne
i love to be named the one to fail in high school
so i can come back, and surprise the damn fools
with skills so ill a sick lyrical typhoon
while they a nobody, who suddenly like you
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Kau the Lion
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Re: Untitled lyrical heat

Post by Kau the Lion »

Flow and multies were on point. Overall, the lyrical content was a bit boring though the last couple of bars were pretty cool. Keep dropping, man.
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Re: Untitled lyrical heat

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Nothing really mind-shattering, but I was digging the flow. Nice little piece.
The precision of my flows in terms of tone and diction
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Re: Untitled lyrical heat

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nice flow, multies are dope, all in all i like this. short but sweet i guess. nice drop bro.
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Post by MesaR »

Yeah it was alright.. nothing really worth quoting but you did your thing, keep dropping, keep elevating.
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