J Dilla's Cold Steel (Traumatic)

[lyrical1]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Tq4nQarfkU

3rd verse not as strong as i woulda liked, again the quality aint perfect, my bad on that. I tried to do somethin diferent wit the hook to fit the mood of the beat so if it sound awkward thats why.

[blokB]

honestly i dont like this.... but im not sure why. you obviously have lyrical talent, i like the beat, and your vocals seem to match well even though you fall off in a few spots. i dont care for the hook but maybe it just isnt my style. kinda reminds me of Twisted or KMK mixed with Necro. idk. thanks for droppin tho bruh. keep doin your thing.

[lyrical1]

thx for the feedback

[Sentus]

Aight,beat was pretty different, that isn't exactly how I would flow to it but what you did works too. Quality hurts the most man, but I think you know that. If you had some clear vocals this track could have been really good. Your lyrics were pretty solid through out and your flow was good too. Just try and get some quality and you'll be set.

[lyrical1]

^ true true, thx for the feedback