Now What

[lyrical1]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S8Nf4j1P41s

I know, quality aint bout shit, lol

[Alvin]

The effects are a little ruff, but there is no denying your lyrics are pretty ill man. You have some good emotion, nice delivery... only thing is the audio quality. "living with conditions...." bars are fucking sick man. Nice display of talent. Just engineer it better man. Chibby

[lyrical1]

yeah i know man, thx for the feeback though i gotta better digital studio now so im hopin the shit turns out more solid as far as the quality goes.

[Deciple]

your becoming more and more of an ill artist the more i find your stuff.. you got some solid flow man, good lyrics also.. you can write well.. hook was wack with the effect you put on it IMO... just rap it and double it up that sound make a good hook... keep em coming

[lyrical1]

^What!!!!!, u aint feelin the hook?!,...jk, I just did somerandom shit wit the hook. I kinda just wanted the vocal effect to be different cuz mean rapping the hook real intense aint sound so hot either.

Preciate the honest feedback though, I consider your sugestions. Ill be checkin more of ya tracks out, I just been too busy to stay on long and listen to cats joints.

[Deciple]

i got alot of them in the chamber... search them up

[lyrical1]

cool, ill check em out

[Slicka]

lyrics are nice flow is nice 2.......not feeling the chorus though.......shit wit betta quality your on your way

[lyrical1]

thx for the props and feedback ^

[2xS]

I Actually Thought The Opening Thing Was Kinda Old School Eminem-ish. Back In His LP Days Lol. Verses 1 Is Nice As Far As Delivery And Vocab. Dawg, I'ma Stop Mentioning That Cuz You Bring That Same Offer To The Table In Every Track. Chorus Sucks! LOL 2nd Verse Is Nicely Done, "Uncatalogued Syndromes, Etc" Nice Syllable Delivery And Vocab. "Furnace Cage, Murder Rage" Good Shit.This Chorus Is So Annoying. That Effect Sounds Like An Old Woman, Who's Been Smoking All Her Life, Has A RAspy Voice, And Is Using The PA At The Old Ghetto Free CLinic, Kinda Like Tha One In "Don't Be A Menace To South Central While Drinking Your Juice In The Hood" . Wow, That Was Long. Anyways, Another Nice Verse. You're Killin Shit Man, I Can't Wait Ta Hear New Material With Your Better Equipment

[lyrical1]

Its official, the hook is trash, lol. the effect bs was to be whateva i can always fix that though.

Preciate the fdbk for sure