Skill Set

[lyrical1]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y4XjmJb_y_c

[Livenlearn]

Lyrically ur a beast at least on this song that is, ur emotion is str8, and delivery decent. Real solid track here, but you have to fix the quality because thats what hurts a good drop like this. Your vocals are also too low in the mix. The chorus was eh, not a big fan but it was easy and helpd the track move along so not bad...overall try to improve on those areas and ull be str8

[lyrical1]

yeah that shit at the end was whatever, no doubt i agree. And the quality is fuked no doubt (i couldnt get it too loud cuz the shit woulda sound kinda distorted, i just aint got the $ or time to be in a real real studio like that). Really the whole purpose was mainly to showcase the lyrics.
I do appreciate the feedback though, thx