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heavy on me open collab

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left 2 verses open anyone wantin to jump on lemme kno thanks

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Haha, Man, I would be down to jump on a collab with you, i just cant rap about any of that main stream crap, you know, i only wanna rep whats real... Wanna get down on some positive music let me know.. i probably wont record til after the holidays.. but im down for sure
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lol i do both fam i do main steam and underground but yeah il get on some shit wit you fa sho!
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i got u on collab, since i havent done this type of flow in a while, feelin this beat too...
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alright jus pm me your email address n il send it to u
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This beat is fucking raw bro!
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thanks fam good lookin out
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yo man, the hook is NICE. Some parts of your verse seemed a little forced, like a miss match in syllables, but its sick man. I'm rather interested to hear this style with an underground topic. Good Drop no Doubt Though.
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The mix need a little work, vocals need to come down 1.5-3.0 DB. Beats decent. I'd spend a little more time on perfecting your flow on this track, its coming across kinda robtic. If you work on that, you got a decent track homie.
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RedRacRecords wrote:The mix need a little work, vocals need to come down 1.5-3.0 DB. Beats decent. I'd spend a little more time on perfecting your flow on this track, its coming across kinda robtic. If you work on that, you got a decent track homie.
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