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Fallin'

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Haven't dropped in ages.
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I really like this, you brought it, good multi's, good flow stayed on point the whole time.. i would like to hear a full version.. 9/10 for sure man.. Keep it up homie
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I like the song man, nice presence, multi's went hard, it kinda ended abruptly but it possessed the qualities I like to hear in a song, def. keep dropping man u got potential
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Thanks man :),

the abrupt ending was intentional.
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Re: Fallin'

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ya voice kinda remind me off like south park mexican no disrespect or nothing also ya wordplay was crazy bro...........jus would turn the beat down n some parts that ringing gets loud but i fuck wit this.....good drop
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Re: Fallin'

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Shit yeah, nice flow, the consistent internal rhyming really makes the beat live. My head was nodding to the rhythm from the very first bar. Now, I know u cut the beat suddenly at the end intentionally, so there must be some sort of reasoning behind that, but to me I don't like that sudden ending at all. Wish the song was longer, if it was longer and had a sudden ending might be okay, but since its kinda short the sudden ending just makes it feel like half a song. But nonetheless, abrupt ending aside, this was super ill. Reminds me every so slightly of 2mex, especially with the internal rhyming.
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