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Tim Edgar
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Simple 16

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Sup. 2nd drop.Simple 16

Im looking to the future as im stairing in the mirror...
Questioning my Karma, To see what it delivers...
Know i've done wrong, Lived long as a sinner...
Don't get how i went through so many Rizzla.
Lost ina crowd, so they'll never get pictures...
Stay underground where they cannot restrict us...
fat cat fucks, with cream on their whiskers...
relax witha dutch as i cuss these tricksters...
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Understand now, not proud, want forgivness...
Talk about peace n how its hard to visit...
but this is my life n damn right ima live it...
High as a Kite n im free as a spirit...
Born in the night when the fog was at its thickest...
Swore to do right through the pain n the sickness...
Swore to do right, to change the game and lift us...
im Bored of this life. and the political strictness.
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I really couldn't relate to it cause I usually stay high enough to love life. But like Rugged said, this looks like it should be in the poet corner. Nothing wow just random.

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