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Sports Series #1 (NFL) feat. Yezzir

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Yezzir's Verse


On the first Sunday twenty-four warriors manned the field with pride
The grid iron always tans and peels their hides as they feel alive
I remember when I grew up dreaming I could be in the NFL
In the end I fell but, with a pen I'll tell a story of the end of hell
Barry Sanders was always breaking ankles it looked like he'd skate on ice
Steve "Air" McNair should've saved his life and never played his wife
There'll never be another receiver that's made like Rice
Used to watch Steve Young strike the air in mid-day and night
You ever watch "The Minister of Defense" storm the line?
Reggie White in the 3 point stance he formed the prime
Bruce Smith in the back field known as the "Sack Man"
Coaches screaming, "He just hit the back! Damn!"
I'm still watchin Charles Woodson shut 'em down quick
He back peddles to explode then he's running out picks
Doesn't matter which Manning they're bound to air it son
I wanna see a Syracuse throwback McNabb to Harrison
It'll always be hard to forget the NFL in the glory days
Yea, Revis is sick but, Deion retired before he played
I don't know what ever happened to playing for blood and glory
Now all I ever see is "I'm under paid!" flood the stories





Murk's Verse

Truly American made by some of America's greats, Montana to Rice with fashion
Barry and Deion Sanders on the field, they know its real, playin like this life's their passion
So many offenses are attractive, like Brees and the Saints of oh nine
Then there's the Urlachers that hurl farther to hit harder, you get placed on your spine
You can get replaced in due time, like Young to Gracia to the next guy
For injuries or otherwise, like Big Ben getting courted for his sex crimes
Emmitt was a quick back, the Fridge would make ya shit pack like a hit from D. Sharper
O Lines need to keep it larger, or the QB is sacked continuous like they're the teams martyrs
Randy Moss like 'Damn they toss me around the league like a football
T.O. in the same boat, because these dudes let their egos stand them about a foot tall
While you have the ones with composure, like Manning's in the pocket
Till they deteriorate like Farve's ankles, his elbows, and the damage to his sockets
Obviously his eyesballs in reference, cuz he should be more hesitant
Constantly on that interception shit, long before the recession hit
In the eighties is when my obsession lit, for the players like fuck the fame
They came into the National Football League just because they love the game...
--~Murk McNasty~--
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Re: Sports Series #1 (NFL) feat. Yezzir

Post by Munteskue_The_Don »

Murk, uh this my first time ever seeing you rap.. so I CANT criticize you...

Yezzir, multi's are alrite.. flow was natural as usual.
But I was expecting something more specticular.

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Post by QwarterZ »

This was a cool piece...not something I really like
but at the same time you flipped it on itself
really made the piece a bit more like...wow....
both of y'all came correct with your own styles
which makes it more enjoyable...nice drop guys...
keep it up!@
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