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Packing Metal[Black and Yellow Remix]

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Re: Packing Metal[Black and Yellow Remix]

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Dude, im never disappointed with your tracks... The beat is off the hook, Lyrics were there and stayed on concept.. The hook.. IMO made the track. the way you delivered it was how it needed to be done.. This track is tight.. definitely gonna subscribe man... this is one of my favorites from you
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thanks for checking it out my dude.
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Re: Packing Metal[Black and Yellow Remix]

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i've been bumpin this track many times a day lol dopeness the hook as Deciple said was delivered perfectly and it gave a great vibe to the song the verses were dope had some great lines there, On the block more than Censorship, i was feelin that man, dope track lookin forward to that mixtape now
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: Packing Metal[Black and Yellow Remix]

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Damn, this is real nice. The beat is fucken godly. Your mic presence is strong man, the lyrics is dope. Feeling the chorus.

Keep Up.

"Packin Metel, Packin Metel" is gonna be stuck in my damn head all day I can tell, ha.
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Re: Packing Metal[Black and Yellow Remix]

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woooord lol thanks for checking it out my nig!
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