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Lay You Down Ft. Shelby

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Lay You Down Ft. Shelby

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http://www.reverbnation.com/dosiaakayun ... ls/5656380

Enjoy, this a song off my new album coming out this january.

beat- paktraxx

production- paktraxx

verses- dosia

chorus- shelby
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Re: Lay You Down Ft. Shelby

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the beat has that slow feel.. when you started you verse you started speaking a little fast and i thought you were gonna do that verse in that style.. which would have made the track pop out.. you know.. IMO i think its good to switch up the styles from verse to verse.. other wise it all sounds the same and people get bored.. The hook is tight.. when she gets real high it kinda sounds off... i think a faster verse for the 2nd verse would make this track a banger...
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Re: Lay You Down Ft. Shelby

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Thanks for the love fam. and i feel u on the going faster bit, jus felt id try and make it smoother. but appreciate the honest feedback my dude.
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