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Superfly(Supemario KP ft K KiLLaH)

Post by K KiLLaH »

Verse 1 Supa Mario KP

Verse 2 K KiLLaH

this is my 1st time doing a collab with sum1 i never met in person
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I like the way the beat kick off/..... Its descent lil hook right there.. i like the slow approach to the track.. Nice use of metas by the first dude from what i hear... i think his quality is low compared to ur ussual drops.. might be his vocals tho or might be me... one more gain this hook is tight.. goes nice with song.. u came hard on them first lines and kept it up throughout... U got a good swagg...even tho its an overated word.. Good use of metaphors and inflection on the punch in the line...once again i be repeating my self... Blah Blah..GOOD DROP... Quality GOOD.. Better on ur verse i think.. And all the other shit id say but uve heard b4... Holla
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Re: Superfly(Supemario KP ft K KiLLaH)

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I'm Proud Both Yall Did Yall Thing :)

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Post by HKX »

1st dude sounded decent I thought he could've put more into his verse he sounded a lil bored 2 me haha. As 4 Killah u did ur thing on dis track dawg u outshined the hell outta Mario on this track no offense 2 Mario I jus thought you killed it more then he did. U brought ur style out which u usually do so props on dat. I actually did a track 2 dis wit Jaie about a good month or 2 ago I thought I'd posted it up when I mixed it but like I told TOYH life gets in da way been hella busy enjoyin' it. I barely posted it up 2day and noticed u had a track called Superfly 2 haha overall dope drop man keep doin' ur thing and keep droppin'
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im tight this nigga said he bought the rights to the damn instrumental n singer grrrrrrr
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wasnt feeling the first dude to be honest. didnt like the emotion he had on his verse...didnt get me into the song at first. now it's your verse..funny thing is you remind me of 40 Cal. but a better flowing one with less stumbles haha. nice verse killah,i like this right here. keep at it.
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Post by IntrinsicCadence »

I liked the intro to the beat, think it woulda been better to not have that pause after the intro before entering into the first verse. I really wasn't feeling the first verse much at all. But, K Killah, your verse was nice. I like your delivery style and the nice multi rhyme scheme that stays real consistent.
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