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Take Ova Feat. Loon E Lou, HKX & RoMe

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Once again another track dat will be on da Chi 2 Cali album. Dis track features RoMe of U.G.H n SmoKeD OuT ProD. Da title speaks 4 itself, enjoy the track and if u need Loon E and I 2 feed sumthin' plz leave us links.
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i love this one dawg. glad you posted it
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Post by Quix »

Nice shit fellaz ... i was feeling ya'll flows!
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Loving This Man Beats Sick I Will Be Listening To This Quite A Few Times Man
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Post by IntrinsicCadence »

Nice drop fellas. Loon, I like the change-up in your flow's rhythm, the diversity of the speed is real nice. I was kinda hopin' you would do a bar or two at that fast pace you started gettin' into a couple times. But I liked the style a lot.
HKX, your lyrics were real ill, I kinda was hopin for you to burst out in some speed for like a bar or two too, with the kinda speed ya flow at that 'shiver..' part. I was hoping to hear some follow up to that particular rhythm. But as it sits, its still dope as hell.
UGH's verse I wasn't feelin' as much, just not the flow style I'm into as much, doesn't feel as genuine to me, feels too much likes he's tryin' to fit an image. It ain't bad bad, and its nice to have some diversity in the flow and lyrical style, but I just wasn't feelin it.
The hook is nice, it fits to mood of the song well, and sits nicely on the beat.
Overall, this is a real nice drop, Loon and HKX, both your verses were great, and the beat's gotta lotta energy in it, which works well with your deliveries.
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the beat is nice yo, but i think you could have had a little intro on this. loon E, i think you got a nice flow and cadence but your voice gets annoying at times, just gets really whiny sometimes. the hook i think could have used some work, quality wise it could have been mixed a little bit more to make it stand out more. wasnt really saying shit in the hook. the energy should have matched the beat as well. the second dude had a nice flow and held it down, didnt say nothing special but his lyrics were pretty cool. third dude had a nice flow as well, shit was on point. he added some punches in there too, not hard but shit made for a nice listen. everyone held it down with the flow for the most part, pretty tight track.
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Post by RedRacRecords »

The first M.C. reminds me of B-Real. Good work on that one, not much to say on the 1st verse. The hook is good, could use a little more work thou. The second M.C. got a unique style. The flow needs a little work, the concept of the delivery is good but something about it seems amature. I think the content could use more work. Third verse is all the way tight. Backups air tight too. Ill job on the mix. I think the last verse should be first, the first verse should be second and the second verse should go last. Only other thing would be to spend a little more time with the hook. Overall track is doap.
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