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IM killin niggas dead with verbal abuse/Bitch niggas ill leave u dieng sippin yo food like juice.I can see you the type to steal rhymes from doctor sues,/But thats alright i get a kick out of that shit too./You can see me on tv channell..TNT,yea im prolly packen TNT,So watch out wen you see me./I always told myself I was suicidal/So im constantly searching for a number one idol./So when I spit it comes from da chest/And when I shoot it come for your fave not yo vest.


...Just warming up....So dont diss it to bad...I know why my shit aint cool from yall....Cause I got that texas style.
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wow you need some practice maybe you should stop listening to chamillionaires wack ass dude is lame as hell i mean not dissin u but yea its better emcees out there..but as far as the written is concerned it was maybe average when compared to most text emcees id give it a 6/10 keep it up...hit me up on aim if u need advice or anything..
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Do i got yo aim?
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no its omg16micz if you want it..
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Post by drunken jesus »

this was weak

and you're on crack if you think chamillionaire is that wack 16
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Lawgix »

cham's actually not that bad to be honest. i got a couple of his mixtapes i downloaded
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

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Post by precise »

wow this is old lol
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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yeah i posted it up for the hall of fame shit as a joke haha some nigga must've clicked on it and decided to comment
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by precise »

ohh ok, LMAO
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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