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Re: My last response to "Yezzir" till he actually tries

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You post pictures of yourself looking like a black and white big-headed jock. And of course I didn't come very hard.. you keystyle these lame generic insults toward me that are NOT personal attacks at all. they're wanna be thuggin with lame multi connects. I honestly think my worst written drop is better than the best work I've ever seen from you. I've definitely better at text, but I've never heard you do audio.. probably cause you never do. In fact, you never really do shit with your life in general, to be honest! And checker PIECES are black and red, fag... any board I've ever played on has been black and white.
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Re: My last response to "Yezzir" till he actually tries

Post by Omega Bill »

All drops so far are decent in this little back and forth text tag you guys are playing.

So, how about this?

Why don't you guys put the skirts down and stop pissing on each other and battle and really see who's better?
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Re: My last response to "Yezzir" till he actually tries

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

lol chess is black and white, checkers are red and black, n e ways.. most of this isn't very personal.. i fail to see much intention of harm here, the rhymescheme was so-so.. a lot of choppy areas, for the most part this was pretty weak....definitely needs some pep in your step, keep droppin though
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Re: My last response to "Yezzir" till he actually tries

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its an aiight verse. but i wanna c more. this starting to look like a mating dance./FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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