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just the chorus

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just a chorus for now, "DONT Trip" but leave feed and what you think...


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Re: just the chorus

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Naaaaa. Nope. Too simple an repetetive. I havent even heard the verses and i already dont like it. Should waited for the finished product to post up.

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Re: just the chorus

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Nahhhhhh.... I Mean Melody Is THere But Yea...U Might Wanna Mix Up The Lines And Give It A Lil More Variation
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Re: just the chorus

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alright then
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