Shadows

[Sentus]

sentus ill wait for your once every 2 weeks to record. any day dawg. i know i aint all that, but i know i can straighten out all your side talk. pick your own shit up before you start up the quick flaw pointing.

Are you fucking kidding me? You're goona say shit because I left feedback? If you can't take criticism gtfo cause rap is not for you.

[FlipSide]

Feedback Is Cool Sentus...Its The Freeposting Thats Getting On My Nerves lol.... BEZ Homie... No Hate

[Lawgix]

dude people are allowed to freepost in the Chamber... its the battle grounds where i have a problem with it... shits cool...

newayz... with the song

you rushed A LOT!!! almost too much... mixing n shit was meh... okay... think the beat was a bit too low tho or the vocals were WAY too high.... n the dubs drowned you out... think a compressor could have helped with the vocals... n gated... newayz i'd give this a 6.5/10 because of the way you spit it... keep it up tho n just ride the beat man... don't rush the shit...

[FlipSide]

Compressor?

[Lawgix]

Compression is used to alter the dynamics of a recording

[Munteskue_lol]

Dude I liked it a lot, I don't see what you guys are talking about with the delivery. If you do it over and make it better, I'd definitely put that in my i-pod

[Lawgix]

see.... heres my take on "ghost writing"... the writer HAS TO KNOW how the emcee spits... if he doesn't know how the emcee delivers each and every bar to syllable... then its gonna wind up being not worth your time to even spit the verse... (not dogging anybody just using this as an example)... Flip has gotten so much positive feedback on his earlier tracks from his way of delivering the flow because he created the flow from his lyrics... that he wrote... (sounds stupid i know but its true)... i personally believe that if the ghost writer knows how the emcee hes writing for delivers a verse then the writer needs to make it sound how the emcee would be saying it or writing it... i don't have a problem with ghost writers but writers need to know how that emcee is spitting and try to put it in their style of writing because the writing is in the format of the way they spit... each artist has different ways of writing... some people write the way they would drop a text on here and use that for the audio verse because they know what to say on each bar and how to say it... PRECISELY... this track Flip rushed it because Mutual wrote it the way he saw it... in his eyes and his style... so to Mutual i would say if your going to continue to ghost write for people i would listen to the artist ur writing for and hear for yourself... but this again comes down to the whole "writing on Illest in text drops and writing in audio format" text drops are cool... but will they ever fit on a beat the way their wrote in text drop format????? not half the time.... its really putting yourself in the audio emcees shoes and getting in his head to figure out "okay so he would spit it THIS way instead of my way" i've ghost wrote A LOT for a buddy of mine but i figured out his style and the way he spits... took 8 fuckin years to get it right but i did... but thats my take... if anybody feels the need to rebuttal feel free

[- Mutual -]

yeah law i get you completely and yeah if i was writing this for him it would have sounded alot better but i didnt like, i wrote it for me but shit was happening and i asked for a favour from Flip, your correct like i wouldnt have had his style perfected but it would have flowed alot better no doubt thanks for that input no doubt much appreciated alot i never intended to get into ghost writing as a major thing but i may do aiight thanks

[FlipSide]

i Agree With Law...And Like I Said...This My First Time Doing This And I Stand by It...Its All About Innovation... He Was like Yo Flip..What U Think ..>I Was Like Yea Lets Do This...Nothing Too Much To Think About... I Know This Seems to Be Regressive To Most... But I Appreciate Mutual Letting Me Butcher His Solid Written When He Could Have Dropped It Way Better Him Self.. And I At least Feel A Degree of Comfort That Some One Could Add The Feed back... Thanks For Peepin Fellas