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I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

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K KiLLaH ft B.O.B mr 385
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

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Soooo This A Great Freestyle...Almost Has to be a written For Me TO Believe It... Plus U Have Way Better Mic Prescence And Delivery Than The Second Dude...But He Aiight Tho But the Doubles I Dont Like At All...Tho I Do It A Lot My Self... Over All This is Dope..If This A Truly A Freestyle Then U Got Mad Skillz... But It Sounds Pre Written To Me..No Knock Just Pointing Out The Difference... Over All Its Ur Ussual Hot Spits..Just Not A Fan Of Commercialized Beats Suck As That.. But U Made It Work..Big uP
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

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it is written lol its a industry freestyle
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Aja!!!! Well Its Hot My Dude... Just Gave It A Second Listen... I Doubt U Would Waste Studio Time On Just Freestyles lol....So I Figured...
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

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Really impressive rhyming. This was just overall dope shit.
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

Post by Lawgix »

Killah had the best verse... 385's verse was okay not impressive at all... that telephone effect on his dubs was lame and annoying to be honest... other wise ya'll rode the beat well and it was a tight track...
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

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Your Delivery & Polished Flow Always K.O's The Mic. Peep Ya The Grammy's KiLLaH
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

Post by Dynamiq »

im really feeling your voice on this beat. *no homo* it fits. and your delivery is on point. had some quotes with "i got swag not shwag,bitch im done with seeds"

word nigga.

we should collab sometime.
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

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werd i love when people quote my audio with no written lyrics for them to read, but yeah nigga ur the man im down for a collab anytime we can talk serious right do u wanna do it over one of my beats or one of urs or to an industry beat already used? its up to you
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

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I thought this was dope as, the first two lines kept me interested it sounded good, you went crazy with the multis, dope as. the last dude's did there thing, but you shined for sure. good track

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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

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This piece was on point my dude
I'm diggin' it, the flow was on point
the punchs were purdy sick, and on point aswell
not much to say, but y'all went in...keep it up bruh
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

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thnx for the luv fam much appreciated i promise more gems coming soon
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

Post by -MenaCe- »

This shiit was crack my nigga...Ya flow was on point man i was feelin this alot..Good Shit


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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

Post by Omega Bill »

Is it just me or do you sound like a mix of Juelz and Jadakiss? haha

Anyways, hot shit my dude. Sound better than most shit I hear on the radio now a days.

Definetley need to hear more of your stuff, man.
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Re: I Can Transform Ya (Freestyle)

Post by IntrinsicCadence »

Nice man, u gotta real solid, consistent flow, and again with a nice rhyme scheme. Your verse definitely owns this one, the other verse ain't bad, but I wasn't feelin' it so much. I'd like to hear you on a collab track with someone else who could really spit some fire (like Dynamiq for instance-- the two of you'd make a nice collab track I'm sure)
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