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A Song I Had For Sumtime Now.. I Was Skeptical On Releasing It For The Quality. But Gimme Sum Input Preferably Someone Who Knows There Stuff About Producing. Critique MUCH APPRECIATED
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really the only thing is your mic soundin like a Telephone... really no helping that until u get a better mic... really no emotion just you spittin... so the verse is like unbelievable lyrics are good... but over all get a better mic man n u'll be good
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Thanks Lawgix, You Have Any Idea What Mic I Should Use? Also What is The Name of That Piece That You Can Cover The Mic To Take Away Some Feedback Off Your Voice?? Its Like A Foam Plate Or Somethin You Spit into.. I See Alot Of Rappers Use Them
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Yea this was cool for what it was...
the mic seemed like just a computer mic
which is cool cuz you really shine
the whole flow was kinda crazy...but the lines were there
the beat was cool, but it reminds me of a unmixed CD
where the voice overpowers the beat....so like Law said
just get a better mic, and POW you got it...
nice drop Creative. keep doing you
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Post by AbZ The Beast »

do u have a audio interface/preamp?( if not i suggest getting one..)or are u just plugging into your soundcard?


this is a solid mic for the price
http://pro-audio.musiciansfriend.com/pr ... sku=476502

there are cheaper ones, but i wouldnt suggest going the cheaper route.IMO
more work u have 2 do mixing and mastering


any ways lyrics were dope no complaints at all homie

keep it up.

shoot me a message if ya have any questions regarding studio set-ups or use of your recording software..


peace


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Your lyrics were tight as fuck on this. Only problem was your mixing. If you got some better quality you would be the shit.
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Thanks For The Feed Guys.. It Will Be Returned
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