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Ryu's Remorse

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Excuses Excuses Can't leave um Living No More
Given The Score I've Forgiven Before
Nights Of Loud Cries caused my Written's 2 Pour
Couldn't voice myself 2 Counselors I Ripped Thru The Cord
Ain't whipping accords or Sitting in Bore
I'm disciplining myself,UR Xtra Small To The T If U Don't Fit In The Tour
Got goals but i'm Dipping fa More Like Tobacco Chewing
You ain't 28 grams what These Wack.o's Doing?
In The first quarter they Wouldn't Know The Half..Verse Sparker
Who's Flow is ass? You In Sto For a Path Where ya Mark Is Done
My Skills Bring Down Their Beat Abilities Like Discount Marking Drums
College boys same one's Sparking Guns Fake Ass Rhymes Guarding Bums
Pardon's Done The Battle grounds is More Like a Garden Son
Corny cat's claim Carrot glow Kill ya self Like Frances Cap Pair wris bro..
Chop off ya leg and throw it over the bridge like there it go's!
Swallow a Turtle n keep with Sucking i Dont wanna Hear Shit hoe
Dudes don't holdup drinks Whining they Need some Grow up Shrinks
Put in work like Me? you don't Blow Nuff ink You donut Think
Pure Like a No Slut Mink..Dudes compared Us u really Wanna Throw Up Links??
O you That Damn Gangsta you'll Settle On the Curb Medaling with words
Off Medicine Disturbed a Veteran Ta Herbs How These Vegetables Emerge?
A Real Boss Huh?? You just got control of Small bizz like the Federal reserve
Supplying's a sport while i Fly through the Sort's with Ryu's Remorse
Guy you a Corpse Worse More Like Lindsey Lohan's cry through the court
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Re: Ryu's Remorse

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You ain't 28 grams what These Wack.o's Doing?
Aha!!! shit was tight
Chop off ya leg and throw it over the bridge like there it go's!
Swallow a Turtle n keep with Sucking i Dont wanna Hear Shit hoe
i see good multies n flow but wtf does swallow a turtle mean dude?
Dudes don't holdup drinks Whining they Need some Grow up Shrinks
Put in work like Me? you don't Blow Nuff ink You donut Think
again good flow n multies but wtf this mean ..specifically the second line
Pure Like a No Slut Mink..Dudes compared Us u really Wanna Throw Up Links??
O you That Damn Gangsta you'll Settle On the Curb Medaling with words
Off Medicine Disturbed a Veteran Ta Herbs How These Vegetables Emerge?
Now this is some sick shit dude...verrrryyy nice
A Real Boss Huh?? You just got control of Small bizz like the Federal reserve
Supplying's a sport while i Fly through the Sort's with Ryu's Remorse
Guy you a Corpse Worse More Like Lindsey Lohan's cry through the court
Again nice shit

I was lost a lil..now i see what toys said bout the structure by centering the script... i guess i just lost my self.. but i def feel the end...very strong finish...
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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