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Re: Air it Out

Post by Kurse »

Yeaaaa...like that grimey hood shit. Not bad for a nigga wit a pink Bronco. I found the "fetus pushin pebbles" line pretty funny lol ...but pretty nice shit for a quick key-up!
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Post by eMCee Havic »

multis were on point lot f dope barres in that shit i like the fetus kickin pepples ish, good opener, closer well put together flow was fire. i like this shit keep postin
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This piece was purdy nice TOYH
the only problem is how are you NOT battling
either way the whole thing is purdy dope
the multi's were on point as usual, the vibe was on some other shit
this is like I'ma rob your ass then sell you your shit back music
well...if it was written for a track
either way nice to see you still droppin' in here

you emo fuck
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this was some nice shit, had a consistent smooth flow all the way through, the mutlties were pretty nice, this seemed quite a deep piece but thats just me, overall i liked this drop, only thing i didnt understand is "sore from jooks" whats does that mean sorry if i dont understand but keep this shit comin it was nice
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If you pull a gun shoot yaself do a Lil Wayne skit

ha. I like this.

Nice drop on some random shit. Good multies.
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It's a fact every word I spit will always be a part of me
Don't needa gun I'll grab a blade and take aim at ya arteries

^^^i like veddy mush this one.

yea dawg. this shit was that hood 2 hood type script. i could definetly relate to sumtn like this. i got this beat on and it flowed real clean. good arrangement bro. everything was relevent. short but sweet amigo.
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I know the hood kinda like Jesus knows the devil
I'm always pushin rocks you're a fetus pushin pebble
AND This
What you know about heroin? I been makin cocaine dip
If you pull a gun shoot yaself do a Lil Wayne skit
Clever, Witty & MADE ME LAUGH Keep Droppin' TOYH
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Re: Air it Out

Post by FlipSide »

creative quoted what i was going to quote so im not quoting shit....
Good flow throughout, nice drop for a key.. very consistent with multies and some word play... nice read
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Post by Haz »

It's a sad story but, I was tainted at a young age
That's why I've never been afraid to let the gun blaze

Good opener

I know the hood kinda like Jesus knows the devil
I'm always pushin rocks you're a fetus pushin pebbles

lol Like the first line

Always been the type of dude that's quick to pull a bar
If I get locked up I'll always be dreamin of the boulevard

word

It's a fact every word I spit will always be a part of me
Don't needa gun I'll grab a blade and take aim at ya arteries

Reminds me of Styles P.

I'm always bound to break off more than ya cook
I could run up on ya boy and leave 'im sore from a jooks

Yerp

I've always been able to move weight without even liftin
If it's war I'll grab the nine the clip and the smith'n

Tough

What you know about heroin? I been makin cocaine dip
If you pull a gun shoot yaself do a Lil Wayne skit

LoL good shit

I always keep the gun stand by the side of the couch
If there's drama I'll be the man to run inside of ya house

Word.


Yeah yo this shit reminded me of Styles P, it was dope lol, Like the wayne shit, n just the Feel to this piece.

Keep at it.
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