Murder by Pen Stroke

[DaPrince]

I murder beats by burning sweets and just sit still
I serve up heat with words I speak, like I spit a grill
my syllable skill gets hospital bills, yes it's ill
feelin' higher than climbin' a mountain while downin' six pills
the difference in our lyrical skill? light years
my peers aren't quite near to my tier right here
deny tears, believe you don't want me to incite fear
i'm killin all your dreams and i'm the one that haunts your nightmares
like Freddy Kruger I'll do ya. You think you're a threat here?
My sense of hearing you've ruined so your screams'll fall on deaf ears
I sweat spears, yes my blood runs with knives, cutters
I'll drain your veins, leave you slain with your life smothered
I'll take what I'm owed when I show up like I'm a night mugger
The flyest composer you know of everytime I write(Wright) brother
The 9th wonder, search Google you'll see my stock's flyin'
you're the little engine that can't, so stop tryin'

[young_jobe]

Even though i dont like punchlines.. yours were decent.. good written stuff

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[QwarterZ]

Hey man this was dope, I'm really feeling this
it's got that put me on a track and just let me flow vibe
I could hear you tearing this up to a bit with a buncha kicks n shit
very nice work man, I think I like this one more then the other, short and sweet
nicely done man!

[DaPrince]

Preciate the feed. uppin

[FlipSide]

I murder beats by burning sweets and just sit still
I serve up heat with words I speak, like I spit a grill

lol...good flo n multies usage through out the piece

my syllable skill gets hospital bills, yes it's ill

Hot line

I sweat spears, yes my blood runs with knives, cutters
I'll drain your veins, leave you slain with your life smothered

see some ill word play n there

Lots more quotables but im at work...again u have mad flow and use the multies nicely...good meta's too... nice piece my dude

-- Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:03 am --

I murder beats by burning sweets and just sit still
I serve up heat with words I speak, like I spit a grill

lol...good flo n multies usage through out the piece

my syllable skill gets hospital bills, yes it's ill

Hot line

I sweat spears, yes my blood runs with knives, cutters
I'll drain your veins, leave you slain with your life smothered

see some ill word play n there

Lots more quotables but im at work...again u have mad flow and use the multies nicely...good meta's too... nice piece my dude