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Always With You

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Slow more of an R&B deep emotional track here, this is from the deepest part of my heart... slower track, Let me know

ATHIEST WARNING: Lyrics may cause you to hate on me, BRING IT
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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dude ...for real this hook is cool... and u got nice flow deciple.. And u convey ur story to perfection this track digs deep sun... i give this a near perfect as far as this goes as a track...good emotion and delivery... great message my dude.. ill look for more drops from u
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Thanks man, Doing what i can for whats worth doing...
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I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Gotta give props to that my dude...and keep doing what it do.. cuz its worth it
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Yeah, im just gonna keep pushing myself, making track after track, growing and growing, but i can say right now, there will never be better tracks then tracks from the heart...
This song is my heart
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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I See Your Still Rocking My Sig Mayne lol This Track Was Nice, The Quality Was Top Shit, The Hook Was Good Went With The Message, Your Lyrics Were Tight, Sounded Natural, Conveyed The message Well, A few Places That You Switchin Rhymes Threw You Off Beat, But You Quickly Got Back On Beat Quickly, This Shit Was nice Just Work On The Transitions Keep This Shit Comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Thanks man, Yeah im going and going more, alot of it has to thank illest and all the feed... |Thanks everyone.. Yeah the sig you made was off the hook dude, no need to change
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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