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Anointed

Post by Darth Vader »

Lighter style mixtape track for ya'll to listen to, done in Nov. '09.

PS - Got a lotta new tracks and a couple videos cookin, will post links as they are finished.

Take this in and enjoy it family.
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Word... beat is descent..i can see now u have a small accent from the intro...but dam u got some flow dude.. it sounds like u got a lil tupac effect to ur voice inflection..more in the beggining.. u helping the beat well.. Is that u on the hook?..... hook could have been better... But other than that its a banger dude... I like this style ..im some real hip hop ..Big up Biggup!
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Re: Anointed

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i like the beats, its ill, as flow wise and delivery and presences on a track i like this out of all your tracks, the hook seems like you are reading it from paper, more energy would be nice on the hook, in my opinion when you flow a hook the same as a verse you need to have more then the verse and in this case its less.. good drop homie, im feelin it
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Re: Anointed

Post by HKX »

ur choice in beats r ill dawg like da beats u flow on, track is ill like da way u flowed on it once again I could hear da accent in ur flow a lil more then da new stuff u have put out. I could hear da transititon 4rm ur older tracks 2 ur newer one's and u have def gotten better on ur presence on da mic. My only prob wit dis track is lack of emotion u gotta make me feel da words ur saying so I could visually see it feel me. Dope track Vader keep doing u.
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