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K KiLLaH - You Should Be My Girl Freestyle(YouTube)

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Re: K KiLLaH - You Should Be My Girl Freestyle(YouTube)

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this was a nice free man, the flow was constant had some nice punchlines and flowed well with the multies and good quality too up it dope song dude and keep that shit comin yeah
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thnx bro i appreciate the feed
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Re: K KiLLaH - You Should Be My Girl Freestyle(YouTube)

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Crazy good man, i cant free style like nuttin, but you free styled like you sat and wrote it first, good stuff, stayed on topic, didnt fall out, goot lines, and rhymes.. Good stuff
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This was purdy dope man, the vibe was purdy sick
nice punches, cool flow, you did your thing, I lol'd at the Jon Benet line, keep it up
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Deciple wrote:Crazy good man, i cant free style like nuttin, but you free styled like you sat and wrote it first, good stuff, stayed on topic, didnt fall out, goot lines, and rhymes.. Good stuff

Thnx bro but i did pre write it lol i record in a studio so i can't be wasting money on bullshit. I believe the correct term for this track is called industry freestyle cuz theres no hook. Thats why i named it you should be my girl freestyle
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i feel u on not wantin to waste mon on stu time. niggas be taxin nowwadays. But it was nice. Now thar u said its more written thean freestyled i see it differently. For a freestyle, it was nice, for a written freestyle...ehh could be better. But you had some clever punches in there, like the slim shady line. Aye, say what u will, but freestyle and pre-meditated rap is basically the same if dont correctly.
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