Def's Poison (Dis ones for da Illest fam!)

[Def-init]

AYO.
100k in Coke!,
250k on da Benz
Gettin high in sensation afta da car jackin,
Den buyin Ice?
Man...Dats priceless!


I can smell blood a world away, tremendous grief
Imagin da unimaginable in life N in dis horrendous strife,
Dats da price ta pay 4 wickedness in da afterlife.
Fire forever turned ta ice,
da new world left ta da deity's device
My art N terminology gets slept on more den most
My vocabulary better den most, it shatters da host
Consider Definit renamed ta " 'Mos Def'-init" den toast!
Im da vestige of hope, no visible evidence in existence
is present ta boast! Def rhymes beautiful like black roses
N Defs never considered where da jokes iz
So feel da shame of reboundin hate, bitchs!

Im fuckin sick....
I masterbate in da morgue, while I masticate on a whore
pain stretches rhymes across da horizon N shore
I commit da readers inta feelin full immersion!
Tears R UR extension when da infinite is a dark aspersion
Listen ta anguish bleedin while hatred sits wit da hands tremblin
I smile, I jus smile, am a ruger wit rhymes dat preffers da absurd
I drag melancholic rhymes out of simple words. No improvement needed!
Shadowed singularly by those doubts in our minds

Da lantern light shines off da glistenin tools N supplies!
so seductive N divine iz da resurrection of death through meth,
so delicious N sublime. I stay listenin, hearin da cryin,
da clawin, da gaspin N don't look down, da dirt won't help UR breathin
Twinklin embers N hand woven sorrow, Da leadin roles in ignorant manners
Bitch, dare not speak aloud, Better not feel da malicious kisses
I sang of loathin attachment N callous caresses
N thusly lost my voice of reason,
N in doin so, im alone in my alienated sufferance
wit serpents wastin away in personal damnation
Im jus aching in da world full of false happiness, man!
How can U be happy in a world dats achin?
Depressin agony becomes U. Bitch Ur deservin of much worse,
Cuz my rhymes will cheer When U B ridin da hearse,

Its dangerous readin when ur a shameless fiend, fiendin!
Im boastin blades N sellin 2 venomous veins
Leave ya frightened screamin, a noiseless pitch
Provide persuasive pills, will my psychosis pass in da niche?
Drenchin white lace, sordid secrets lie in da night.
swollen feet N brusied knuckles, dats life on da street
Bloody organs beat in broken pots, Wit vicious rumours N fallen plots.
Empty clips play there part, Poisoned arrows, Im taken shots!

Your breath glitters wit a brief tradition of cold chrome.
destroy da rest in simple conquest alone, den go ta church N atone!
Forget all uve seen, fuck da hurt N obsene
Ya death is somewhat frightenin only cuz Im enjoyin what Im seein.
Blackened sky, mournful spheres.
drownin da weak in blood consumin tears!
Am totally unaware of da terrible horror lurkin in there
Agonizin oblivion, black plague, hunger N hate.
Mortal people dis ur fate.
As I sleep my subconsciousness reigns
Consider me da anti-savior wit visions of misery, sorrow N pain

[RainMan]

Sorry man but this is garbage...

I had a feeling it would be shit just from the opener

"AYO.
100k in Coke!,
250k on da Benz
Gettin high in sensation afta da car jackin,
Den buyin Ice?
Man...Dats priceless!"


Please aquire a better taste in rappers, Cause clearly the shit you been listning to is pollutin your mind

[FlipSide]

LMAO!!! ^^^^
I thought it was aiight but i do gotta agree with that intro... had some nice parts in ur flow more toward the last two paragraphs.. At least from what i think...at least i see confidence in it... and to me it flowed well.. i think u deep with it, but the superficial was on it like a top hat..

Bloody organs beat in broken pots, Wit vicious rumours N fallen plots.
Empty clips play there part, Poisoned arrows, Im taken shots!

Thought that was tight...

Your breath glitters wit a brief tradition of cold chrome.
destroy da rest in simple conquest alone, den go ta church N atone!
Forget all uve seen, fuck da hurt N obsene
Ya death is somewhat frightenin only cuz Im enjoyin what Im seein.

Damn if u could deliver that while spittin it would sound hot...i think...well fuck it

[Mass Effex]

Damn, this dude's movin' 100k of cocaine, has a 250,000 dollar benz, and masterbates in the morgue...interesting.

[Def-init]

Sorry man but this is garbage...

I had a feeling it would be shit just from the opener

"AYO.
100k in Coke!,
250k on da Benz
Gettin high in sensation afta da car jackin,
Den buyin Ice?
Man...Dats priceless!"


Please aquire a better taste in rappers, Cause clearly the shit you been listning to is pollutin your mind

For real.. Kinda hard to take ur input seriously from someone that names him self after a retard(Rainman?)

Was bored N da intro was funny to me which is all dat matters lol.

Thx for the feedback thou all.

-- Tue May 11, 2010 6:29 am --

Damn, this dude's movin' 100k of cocaine, has a 250,000 dollar benz, and masterbates in the morgue...interesting.

LMAO Indeed!!! Pure jokes lol.
was kind of the point of the whole rap lol

thx again for the input fam heh

[MOEstradamus]

I can smell blood a world away, tremendous grief
Imagin da unimaginable in life N in dis horrendous strife,
Dats da price ta pay 4 wickedness in da afterlife.
Fire forever turned ta ice,
da new world left ta da deity's device
My art N terminology gets slept on more den most
My vocabulary better den most, it shatters da host
Consider Definit renamed ta " 'Mos Def'-init" den toast!
Im da vestige of hope, no visible evidence in existence
is present ta boast! Def rhymes beautiful like black roses
N Defs never considered where da jokes iz
So feel da shame of reboundin hate, bitchs!
ok need to work on your flow a bit it was choppy here and there not really liken your style and simple rhymes like most most host thats a no


im not goin to quote anymore of this it was all the same most of your flow was choppy very common ez thing to flow keep workin tho try and use more vocab and multis and keep droppin