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Pardon Me

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This is a new single I just finished wrapping up! It's more-or-less of a self-introduction into the mainstream. When you bump into a game...it's always polite to say "Pardon Me" Please feed...I hope you enjoy.
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Title: "Pardon Me"
Artist: Kurse
Producer: Kurse (R. Bueno)
Written By: R. Bueno
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Recorded @ D-Lab 21
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Re: Pardon Me

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i like the quality of this drop... you got that low raspy voice... kinda lil gansta with it... the hook was descent... but this is the kinda beat i would murder man....i think i saw ur studio pick...u make ur beats..?never mind just heard u produce ur shit lol and where yall niggas from? just wanna kno where ya sound from.....other than that... sounds mad polished... nice flow... Brah... now please feed on at least one of my shits... i want at least some one that can give some real critic to feed my shit.. other than loon e or hkx
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Re: Pardon Me

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this was pretty good... i think the Luda line u coulda re worded it a bit... felt it was a tad rushed... like "but if Luda called today i'd go mainstream at least" just to make it flow a bit better... just sayin... but the production is fantastic... did u make the beat? it sounds like somethin u'd cook up... lol... good shit man you keep doin ya thing... i'm bout to step back into the studio once i get some time n money!!! lol... peace fam
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Re: Pardon Me

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this is dope as hell, the hook was nice i thought flowed well, catchy shit, the verses were dope as hell, like lawgiz said some lines coulda be polished up a lil but i aint gone hate cus this track was fire none the less, i just keep repeatin this shit over and over, i'm gonna know this off by heart, and dude are you goin mainstream, so i could be hearin your shit down here? i hope so anyhow dope track Kurse keep doin what you do
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Re: Pardon Me

Post by HKX »

u already kno how I feel bout dis track dawg I was there when u made dat beat haha ill shit homie pico de gallo nigga wat haha keep killin' dat shit dawg
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